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What would you do if someone borrowed money from you?
I probably polite declien.
If someone borrow money me we will bad releationship.
So, I never borrow money someone too.
If I need some money I use internet banking.
The korea internet banking borrow the money easy.
Thank u Divina :)
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Hi, Neo!
2. If someone borrow money me we will bad releationship.
3. So, I never borrow money someone too.
4. If I need some money I use internet banking.
5. The korea internet banking borrow the money easy.
Thank you for doing your homework~
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I probably polite declien.
>>I would probably decline politely.
2. If someone borrow money me we will bad releationship.
>>If someone borrows money from me, it could harm our relationship.
3. So, I never borrow money someone too.
>>So, I never borrow money from others either.
4. If I need some money I use internet banking.
>>If I need money, I use internet banking.
5. The korea internet banking borrow the money easy.
>>In Korea, internet banking makes it easy to borrow money.
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