homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Why is it important to keep your eyes on your goal? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: It is important to keep my goal. Because If I success goal. I will be happy. So It is good to making a goal.
강사 첨삭
Hey, Belle. I can see that you are making an effort to keep up with your homework. I appreciate it. Keep learning new vocabulary and try to use it in your writing, and keep practicing writing longer texts to build confidence and fluency. Keep it up! ~Teacher Jane :)
It is important to keep my goal.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: It is important to keep my eyes on my goal.
Because If I success goal. I will be happy.
>> Because if I succeed in reaching my goal, I will be happy.
So It is good to making a goal.
>> So it is good to make a goal.
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