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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing. I agree, it can be scary how technology can develop so fast. It’s great how you keep yourself updated with the trends.
See you!
-Teacher Ash
always thanks for Encourage me. I made pride by you.
>> Thank you for always encouraging me.
when I get a new product, I don\'t read manual. but I find the homepage or refer Youtube.
>> When I get a new product, I don’t read the manual but watch the discussion about the product on YouTube or on its website.
almost I figure it out.
>> The, I figure out how it works.
Nowadays I think that very develop faster than before.
>> Nowadays, I think technology is developing faster than before.
sometimes I worried can\'t keep up. because I am in IT team.
>> Sometimes, I’m worried I can’t keep up because I am in the IT team.
But I know effort trend technology.
>> So, I make an effort to learn about technological trends.
so I often listen to tech news
>> That is why I often listen to news about technology.
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