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When people who heard complaints already feel bad, then I just stay silent. They might react bluntly, then my mind become worse. In other case, another people already said similar complaint, then I don\'t need to complain again.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, you\'re right.
There are really times when it\'s better to stay silent.
_T. SHAY^^
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When people who heard complaints already feel bad, then I just stay silent.
>>Correct
OR: If people are already upset from hearing complaints, I don\'t say anything.
They might react bluntly, then my mind become worse.
>>They might react bluntly, and then my mind becomes worse.
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, you\'re right.
There are really times when it\'s better to stay silent.
_T. SHAY^^
***
When people who heard complaints already feel bad, then I just stay silent.
>>Correct
OR: If people are already upset from hearing complaints, I don\'t say anything.
They might react bluntly, then my mind become worse.
>>They might react bluntly, and then my mind becomes worse.
OR: They might respond harshly, which only makes me feel worse.
In other case, another people already said similar complaint, then I don\'t need to complain again.
>>In another case, other people have already made a similar complaint, so I don\'t need to complain again.
In other case, another people already said similar complaint, then I don\'t need to complain again.
>>In another case, other people have already made a similar complaint, so I don\'t need to complain again.
OR: When others have already raised the same complaint, I don\'t have to complain again.
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