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2025-09-12 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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My favorite book character is kiki. Because she is kind. And she helps main character. Also, she isn\'t ordinary.

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Good evening, Su [이름]! ^^,)

We tend to prefer characters to whom we can relate.
Fictional characters can elicit intense emotions, allowing readers or viewers to identify with their challenges, joys, and development.
This emotional resonance can foster a sense of closeness comparable to real-life interactions.

Thank you for this composition. I\'ve read it well.
Have a good weekend!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


My favorite book character is kiki.
Because she is kind.
>>> My favorite book character is Kiki because she is kind.

And she helps main character.
>>> She helps the main character.

Also, she isn\'t ordinary.
>>> Also, she isn\'t an ordinary character.

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