Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you think of your childhood friends?
When I was child we always toghter plays.
I was really good memory and It was imortatnt.
but, We can\'t often meet. because We are all busy.
so, We promised two times a year for meet.
I\'m going to meet tomorrow.
Enjoy your weekend. :) Divina.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
2. I was really good memory and It was imortatnt.
3. but, We can\'t often meet. because We are all busy.
4. so, We promised two times a year for meet.
5. I\'m going to meet tomorrow.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. When I was child we always toghter plays.
>>When I was a child, we always played together.
2. I was really good memory and It was imortatnt.
>>I have really good memories, and they are important to me.
3. but, We can\'t often meet. because We are all busy.
>>But we can’t meet often because we are all busy.
4. so, We promised two times a year for meet.
>>So, we promised to meet twice a year.
5. I\'m going to meet tomorrow.
>>I’m going to meet them tomorrow.
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