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Recently, \'K-pop demon hunters\' made people more be interested in Korean culture. They danced or sang K-pop songs and uploaded on Youtube or Tik-tok. When I traveled abroad, many people can speak in Korean language. I was surprised and noticed the influence of K-pop.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, I saw a lot of videos of people singing \'Golden\' here in the Philippines too.
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, I saw a lot of videos of people singing \'Golden\' here in the Philippines too.
_T. SHAY^^
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Recently, \'K-pop demon hunters\' made people more be interested in Korean culture.
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Recently, \'K-pop demon hunters\' made people more be interested in Korean culture.
>>Recently, \'K-pop demon hunters\' made people more () interested in Korean culture.
OR: Recently, \'K-pop demon hunters\' sparked more interest in Korean culture.
They danced or sang K-pop songs and uploaded on Youtube or Tik-tok.
They danced or sang K-pop songs and uploaded on Youtube or Tik-tok.
>>They danced or sang K-pop songs and uploaded them on Youtube or Tik-tok.
When I traveled abroad, many people can speak in Korean language.
When I traveled abroad, many people can speak in Korean language.
>>When I traveled abroad, many people could speak Korean.
OR: When I travelled abroad, I found that many people could speak Korean.
I was surprised and noticed the influence of K-pop.
I was surprised and noticed the influence of K-pop.
>>Correct
OR: I was surprised and realized how influential K-pop is.
OR: I was surprised and realized how influential K-pop is.
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