Homework
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What are some fun activities that foreign people can do in your area?
We have a lot of mountains in my area.
So, I recommand go to hiking If come to foreign people our area .
and, There are many various delicious restaurants.
I belive foreign people will definitely like my area.
If you come hear I would guide in my area.
Thank u Divina :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
2. So, I recommand go to hiking If come to foreign people our area .
3. and, There are many various delicious restaurants.
4. I belive foreign people will definitely like my area.
5. If you come hear I would guide in my area.
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. We have a lot of mountains in my area.
>>We have a lot of mountains in my area.
2. So, I recommand go to hiking If come to foreign people our area .
>>So, I recommend going hiking if foreign people come to our area.
3. and, There are many various delicious restaurants.
>>Also, there are many delicious restaurants.
4. I belive foreign people will definitely like my area.
>>I believe foreign people will definitely like my area.
5. If you come hear I would guide in my area.
>>If you come here, I would guide you around my area.
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