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Complaining doesn\'t always lead to positive change, but if we don\'t complain anything, we couldn\'t get any change. I think a reasonable complaint is just a feedback, so a boss need to heard that carefully and change that. It depends on the boss\'s decisions.
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Hi, Megan^^
You\'re right about that.
If change doesn\'t happen, at least, we tried.
_T. SHAY^^
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Complaining doesn\'t always lead to positive change, but if we don\'t complain anything, we couldn\'t get any change.
>>Complaining doesn\'t always lead to a positive change, but if we don\'t complain anything, we can\'t get any change.
You\'re right about that.
If change doesn\'t happen, at least, we tried.
_T. SHAY^^
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Complaining doesn\'t always lead to positive change, but if we don\'t complain anything, we couldn\'t get any change.
>>Complaining doesn\'t always lead to a positive change, but if we don\'t complain anything, we can\'t get any change.
OR: Not all complaints create change, yet without complaining, change will never happen.
OR: While complaining doesn\'t always lead to improvement, staying silent guarantees no change at all.
I think a reasonable complaint is just a feedback, so a boss need to heard that carefully and change that.
>>I think a reasonable complaint is just feedback, so a boss needs to listen carefully and act on it.
I think a reasonable complaint is just a feedback, so a boss need to heard that carefully and change that.
>>I think a reasonable complaint is just feedback, so a boss needs to listen carefully and act on it.
It depends on the boss\'s decisions.
>>Correct
OR: It all comes down to the boss\'s decision.
>>Correct
OR: It all comes down to the boss\'s decision.
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