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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.
I think a 4.5 work week is also good.
-Teacher Ash
In my case, I have 15 days vacation for 1 year and add 5 days summer vacation.
>> In my case, I have 15 days of vacation, and 5 days of summer vacation annually.
I think to enough.
>> I think this is enough.
if vacation days increase, maybe my monthly pay decrease..
>> If my vacation days increase, then my monthly pay might decrease.
and Government preparing to working day for 4.5 days.
>> The government is also planning a 4.5-day work week.
I agree.
>> I agree with this plan.
I think to important co-workers. because meet everyday... very sad..
>> I think a reduced work week is important for employees because meeting every day is not good.
actually I am very important my family.
>> Honestly, my family is important to me.
I think I need a family to have a company. nice word.
>> My family is the reason why I work.
Thank you.
>> CORRECT!
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