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2025-09-16 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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Homework: How many vacation days do workers in your country usually get per year? Is it enough? How important is it to get along with co-workers? Is it a good idea to socialize with them outside work? In my case, I have 15 days vacation for 1 year and add 5 days summer vacation. I think to enough. if vacation days increase, maybe my monthly pay decrease.. and Government preparing to working day for 4.5 days. I agree. I think to important co-workers. because meet everyday... very sad.. actually I am very important my family. I think I need a family to have a company. nice word. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 


Thanks for sharing your thoughts. 

I think a 4.5 work week is also good.


-Teacher Ash


In my case, I have 15 days vacation for 1 year and add 5 days summer vacation.

>> In my case,  I have 15 days of vacation, and 5 days of summer vacation annually.


I think to enough.

>> I think this is enough. 


 if vacation days increase, maybe my monthly pay decrease..

>> If my vacation days increase, then my monthly pay might decrease. 


and Government preparing to working day for 4.5 days.

>> The government is also planning a 4.5-day work week. 


 I agree.

>> I agree with this plan. 


I think to important co-workers. because meet everyday... very sad..

>> I think a reduced work week is important for employees because meeting every day is not good. 


actually I am very important my family.

>> Honestly, my family is important to me. 


I think I need a family to have a company. nice word.

>> My family is the reason why I work. 


Thank you.

>> CORRECT!


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