Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are your cravings? Why?
I am cravings to freedom now. Because I am tired. I want to rest all days.
Next, I am cravings to money a lot. Because The money will be freedom me.
But, my best cravings to health.
If my health is not good, freedom & money is not important.
Good night Divina :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
2. Next, I am cravings to money a lot. Because The money will be freedom me.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes for correction:
1. I am cravings to freedom now. Because I am tired. I want to rest all days.
>>I am craving freedom now because I am tired. I want to rest all day.
2. Next, I am cravings to money a lot. Because The money will be freedom me.
>>Next, I am craving money a lot because money will give me freedom.
3. But, my best cravings to health.
>>But my biggest craving is for health.
4. If my health is not good, freedom & money is not important.
>>If my health is not good, freedom and money are not important.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.