Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: What is more important: things you see or things you feel? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: I think seeing is more important. Because I see something, I can feel after I see it. So I see something, I can feel or I didn\'t see anything, I can\'t feel anything.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. You can already write simple sentences, but continue to focus on using correct word order. You are doing a great job. Keep going! ~Teacher Jane : )
I think seeing is more important.
>> CORRECT
Because I see something, I can feel after I see it.
>> Because after I see something, then I can feel something about it.
So I see something, I can feel or I didn\'t see anything, I can\'t feel anything.
>> So if I see something, I can feel something about it, but if I didn\'t see anything, then I couldn\'t feel anything about it.
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