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2025-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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Compatible people make a social activity enjoyable. When I go for a social activity with them, I don\'t feel it\'s a burden and just enjoy a social activity. And I think some rewards can make a social activity more enjoyable. For example, I need to eat for dinner with my professors, it must be really nice and expensive food for free.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Yes, it\'s always easier when you are with people you are comfortable with.
_T. SHAY^^
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Compatible people make a social activity enjoyable.
>>Being with compatible people makes a social activity enjoyable.
OR: The company of compatible people makes social events enjoyable.
When I go for a social activity with them, I don\'t feel it\'s a burden and just enjoy a social activity.

>>When I join a social activity with them, I don\'t feel burdened and can just enjoy.

OR: Going to social events with them is enjoyable rather than burdensome.

And I think some rewards can make a social activity more enjoyable.

>>Correct
OR: I believe that incorporating rewards can enhance the enjoyment of social activities.
For example, I need to eat for dinner with my professors, it must be really nice and expensive food for free.
>>For example, if I have dinner with my professors, it will be great to have really nice and expensive food for free.

OR: As an example, having dinner with my professors would be more enjoyable if the food is excellent and free of charge.

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