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2025-09-17 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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I got a gold medal in the Taekwondo contest,and then I was proud me a lot.

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Happy Wednesday, Su [이름]!

When you perform well, you should feel proud of yourself since it increases your self-esteem, confidence, and sense of success in general.
Being proud of oneself promotes beneficial results, such as drawing in a more upbeat atmosphere and perspective, and it also increases confidence in one\'s capacity to accomplish future objectives.

Thank you for doing your composition.

I will talk to you later in class. See you!^^

__T. Mayleen :)


I got a gold medal in the Taekwondo
contest,and then I was proud me a lot.
>>> I got a gold medal in the Taekwondo contest, and then I was very proud of myself.

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