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What are your usual conversation topics with your colleagues during break time?
I usually take walk lunch break time with colleagues.
We often talk about company works during walk.
and We sometime talk about weekends habbies.
but, I like talk about English.
because My colleagues speak English well.
I want to learn them how to study English.
but, They told me. \"You didn\'t study English hard. So, You hard study more.\" I was regret. ;;;
Thank u Divina :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jayjay!
2. We often talk about company works during walk.
3. and We sometime talk about weekends habbies.
4. but, I like talk about English.
5. because My colleagues speak English well.
6. I want to learn them how to study English.
7. but, They told me. \"You didn\'t study English hard. So, You hard study more.\" I was regret. ;;;
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I usually take walk lunch break time with colleagues.
>>I usually take a walk with my colleagues during our lunch break.
2. We often talk about company works during walk.
>>We often talk about work while walking.
3. and We sometime talk about weekends habbies.
>>Sometimes, we also talk about our weekend hobbies.
4. but, I like talk about English.
>>But I like talking about English the most.
5. because My colleagues speak English well.
>>That\'s because my colleagues speak English well.
6. I want to learn them how to study English.
>>I want to learn how they studied English.
7. but, They told me. \"You didn\'t study English hard. So, You hard study more.\" I was regret. ;;;
>>But they told me, \"You didn’t study English hard enough, so you need to study more.\" I regretted it.
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