homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: How does noticing beautiful things affect a person’s mood or happiness? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: It can maybe notice. If we seeing beautiful things, Our mood will be happy. Example we go to the flower garden, It will be very fantastic.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Belle. Thank you for sharing your thoughts on the homework topic. Good job! I hope you have a great weekend. ~Teacher Jane ^^
It can maybe notice.
>> I may notice it.
If we seeing beautiful things, Our mood will be happy.
>> When we see beautiful things, our mood will be happy.
Example we go to the flower garden, It will be very fantastic.
>> For example, when we go to the flower garden, it will be very fantastic.
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