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I\'m a clumsy girl, so I made a lot of mistakes. I learned many things from mistakes. First, I need to do double check before done,so double checking is one of my habits now. I distrust myself, so I check again when I became anxious. While I was working, and if some people criticized something, then I needed to say sorry at first. After acting without any excuse, explain it. Even if it\'s not your fault.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
That\'s not really easy to do, but the fact that you are trying to really shows that you are kind.
_T. SHAY^^
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I\'m a clumsy girl, so I made a lot of mistakes.
>>I\'m a clumsy girl, so I make a lot of mistakes.
Thank you for sharing.
That\'s not really easy to do, but the fact that you are trying to really shows that you are kind.
_T. SHAY^^
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I\'m a clumsy girl, so I made a lot of mistakes.
>>I\'m a clumsy girl, so I make a lot of mistakes.
OR: I tend to make many mistakes because I\'m a bit clumsy.
I learned many things from mistakes.
>>Correct
OR: My mistakes have taught me many things.
First, I need to do double check before done, so double checking is one of my habits now.
>>First, I need to double-check before finishing, so double-checking has become one of my habits.
I learned many things from mistakes.
>>Correct
OR: My mistakes have taught me many things.
First, I need to do double check before done, so double checking is one of my habits now.
>>First, I need to double-check before finishing, so double-checking has become one of my habits.
OR: Double-checking is important, so I made it a habit whenever I complete something.
I distrust myself, so I check again when I became anxious.
>>I don\'t fully trust myself, so I check again when I become anxious.
I distrust myself, so I check again when I became anxious.
>>I don\'t fully trust myself, so I check again when I become anxious.
OR: Since I lack confidence sometimes, I re-check my work to be sure.
While I was working, and if some people criticized something, then I needed to say sorry at first.
>>When I was working, if some people criticized me, I learned to apologize first.
After acting without any excuse, explain it. Even if it\'s not your fault.
>>After apologizing without making any excuses, explain the situation-even if isn\'t your fault.
While I was working, and if some people criticized something, then I needed to say sorry at first.
>>When I was working, if some people criticized me, I learned to apologize first.
After acting without any excuse, explain it. Even if it\'s not your fault.
>>After apologizing without making any excuses, explain the situation-even if isn\'t your fault.
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