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My favorite song is 졸업.
Because that song can make me
feel happy :)
And my favorite music\'s
type is K-pop.Because K-pop is
exciting.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Su [이름]!
Just like you, I also enjoy listening to K-pop songs. I may not understand the lyrics very well, but the songs I listen to make me feel good.^^
Music is the heartbeat of the world. It is the beat of our happiness, a gauge of our sorrow, and the childlike memory of the things that fill our hearts.
See you later in class.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
My favorite song is 졸업.
>>> CORRECT
Because that song can make me
feel happy :)
Because that song can make me
feel happy :)
>>> It\'s because this song makes me feel happy. :)
And my favorite music\'s
type is K-pop.Because K-pop is
exciting.
And my favorite music\'s
type is K-pop.Because K-pop is
exciting.
>>> My favorite type of music is K-pop because it is exciting.
>>> OR: K-pop is my favorite kind of music since it\'s energetic.
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