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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I agree with you.
Travelling costs a lot.
-Teacher Ash
Hi, I think that traveling alone case is disadvantage.
>> Hi, I think that traveling alone is a disadvantage.
I am alone.. or scared.
>> When I am alone, I feel scared.
when we traveling, I feel to learn, happy emotion, victory ermotion.
>> When I travel together with a group or with my family, I feel happy and learn a lot of things.
I like traveling. but spent much money.
>> I like traveling, but it costs a lot of money.
I not easy talk about local people.
>> It is not easy to talk to locals.
and I want to talk shared local peple. but I don\'t understand. and different culture.
>> I want to talk and share my culture with the locals, but I don’t understand their language and culture yet.
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