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2025-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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What are the advantages and disadvantages of traveling alone? Do you like to talk to the local people when you travel? Why or why not? Hi, I think that traveling alone case is disadvantage. I am alone.. or scared. when we traveling, I feel to learn, happy emotion, victory ermotion. I like traveling. but spent much money. I not easy talk about local people. and I want to talk shared local peple. but I don\'t understand. and different culture.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 


Thanks for sharing your thoughts. I agree with you.

Travelling costs a lot. 


-Teacher Ash



Hi, I think that traveling alone case is disadvantage.

>> Hi, I think that traveling alone is a disadvantage.


 I am alone.. or scared.

>> When I am alone, I feel scared. 


when we traveling, I feel to learn, happy emotion, victory ermotion.

>> When I travel together with a group or with my family, I feel happy and learn a lot of things. 


I like traveling. but spent much money.

>> I like traveling, but it costs a lot of money. 


I not easy talk about local people.

>> It is not easy to talk to locals. 


 and I want to talk shared local peple. but I don\'t understand. and different culture.

>> I want to talk and share my culture with the locals, but I don’t understand their language and culture yet. 


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