Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What do you usually buy with your money?
I usually want to buy goods about hiking.
Because, my hobby is hiking weekend.
but, The hiking goods expensive in the korea.
So, sometime I need my wife\'s permission about buy hiking goods.
Anyway, I\'m going to hiking this weekend with my colleagues.
From Neo.
Thank u Divina.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I usually want to buy goods about hiking.
>>I usually want to buy hiking gear.
2. Because, my hobby is hiking weekend.
>>This is because my hobby is hiking on the weekends.
3. but, The hiking goods expensive in the korea.
>>However, hiking gear is expensive in Korea.
4. So, sometime I need my wife\'s permission about buy hiking goods.
>>So sometimes, I need my wife\'s permission to buy it.
5. Anyway, I\'m going to hiking this weekend with my colleagues.
>>Anyway, I\'m going hiking this weekend with my colleagues.
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