Homework

2012-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Louis

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear [Name].Sally. Please, check my homework. Hi Daniel, My name is [Name]. This is my friend Jason. He's 12. His sister is nine. His pet is a budgie. His name is Dickens. Jason and I go to the same school. There are 450 boys and girls in our school. Jason's form teacher is Mrs. [Name]. She has got a pet, too. Her pet is a tortoise. Our form teacher is Mr. [Name]. I like his lessons. He has two dogs. The dogs love to play in his garden. Now I have a question for you. What's your pet?

강사 첨삭

Hello there! Happy Thursday! Thank you very much for your composition. You did a good job! You only committed very minimal errors which show that you are already really improving. Anyway, please go over the corrections and please feel free to approach me if ever you have some questions and/or clarifications. Have a great day! See you! -T. Sally- Dear [Name].Sally.>> Dear [Name]. [Name],Please, check my homework.>> Can you please check my homework? Thank you!Hi Daniel, >> Hi Daniel!My name is [Name]. >> Correct. This is my friend Jason. >> Correct.  He\'s 12. >> Correct.  His sister is nine. >> He has a younger sister aged 9.  His pet is a budgie. His name is Dickens. >> He has a budgie named dickens.  Jason and I go to the same school. >> Correct. There are 450 boys and girls in our school. >> Correct. Jason\'s form teacher is Mrs. [Name]. >> Jason\'s former teacher was Mrs. [Name].  She has got a pet, too. Her pet is a tortoise. >> She has got a pet, too. It's a tortoise. Our form teacher is Mr. [Name]. >> Our former teacher was Mr. [Name]. I like his lessons. >>Correct.  He has two dogs. >> Correct. The dogs love to play in his garden. >> Correct. Now I have a question for you. >> Correct. What\'s your pet? >> Correct.

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