Homework
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When and where can you use cash in Korea?
Actually, these days I don\'t use cash.
Samsung pay passible most of store and vending machines.
when I go hiking use cash. because I want drink by old vending machines.
Anyway, I think the cash don\'t use anythings more and more.
Thank u Divina.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Neo!
2. Samsung pay passible most of store and vending machines.
3. when I go hiking use cash. because I want drink by old vending machines.
4. Anyway, I think the cash don\'t use anythings more and more.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. Actually, these days I don\'t use cash.
>>CORRECT!
2. Samsung pay passible most of store and vending machines.
>>Samsung Pay is accepted at most stores and vending machines.
3. when I go hiking use cash. because I want drink by old vending machines.
>>When I go hiking, I use cash because I want to buy drinks from old vending machines.
4. Anyway, I think the cash don\'t use anythings more and more.
>>Anyway, I think cash will be used less and less.
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