HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
My city has many exciting things.
So, I can play with my friends anywhere.
Also,it has teenager place.
We can play nintendo and boardgame there.
So, I like that place.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Su [이름]! ^^,)
That\'s good to know. I am glad there are places where you can have fun with your family and friends.
Thank you for answering you homework. I have made some modifications.
I will talk to you again tomorrow. Have a good night!
__T. Mayleen :)
My city has many exciting things. So, I can play with my friends anywhere.
>>> My city has many exciting things, so I can play with my friends anywhere.
Also,it has teenager place. We can play nintendo and boardgame there.
So, I like that place.
>>> Also, it has a place for teenagers where we can play Nintendo and board games there. Thus, I like that place.
>>> OR: Additionally, it includes a teen area where we can play board games and Nintendo. I therefore enjoy that location.
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