Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you think forgiveness makes life better? Why or why not? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: Yes. Because Forgiveness give to me a lesson. So, It\'s also important to say sorry to someone.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. I appreciate you checking on the homework topic and sharing your opinions. You can write basic sentences and express your ideas well. Keep practicing with short daily notes or a diary in English. Have a wonderful weekend! ~Teacher Jane ^^
Yes.
>> Yes, forgiveness makes life better.
Because Forgiveness give to me a lesson.
>> Forgiveness teaches me a lesson.
So, It\'s also important to say sorry to someone.
>> So it\'s also important to say \"sorry\" to someone we did wrong.
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