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I always say I can\'t die because I still wonder tastes of nice food which I haven\'t eat. I think bucket list item is a spur in our life. It can make us stand something, and earn money to complete the bucket list item.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
I can\'t wait to talk to you more about this topic in class.
_T. SHAY^^
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I always say I can\'t die because I still wonder tastes of nice food which I haven\'t eat.
>>I always say I can\'t die because I still want to taste all the delicious food I haven\'t eaten.
Thank you for sharing.
I can\'t wait to talk to you more about this topic in class.
_T. SHAY^^
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I always say I can\'t die because I still wonder tastes of nice food which I haven\'t eat.
>>I always say I can\'t die because I still want to taste all the delicious food I haven\'t eaten.
OR: I always say I can\'t die because there are still so many delicious foods in the world that I haven\'t had the chance to taste yet.
I think bucket list item is a spur in our life.
I think bucket list item is a spur in our life.
>>I think a bucket list item is a spur in our life.
OR: I believe a bucket list item inspires us to live life fully.
It can make us stand something, and earn money to complete the bucket list item.
>>It can help us endure challenges and earn money to complete our bucket list items.
OR: Having a bucket list can inspire us to face difficulties, work hard, and earn money so we can accomplish the experiences we really want in life.
It can make us stand something, and earn money to complete the bucket list item.
>>It can help us endure challenges and earn money to complete our bucket list items.
OR: Having a bucket list can inspire us to face difficulties, work hard, and earn money so we can accomplish the experiences we really want in life.
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