Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Why do you enjoy hiking?
When I was young I don\'t like hiking.
Because It\'s too hard and boring. so, I thought Why go hiking old people?
But now my best favorite hobby is hiking.
Because It has fresh air and beautiful scenery and releve stress.
So, I like go hiking weekend.
I hope you enjoy hiking too.
Thank u Divina. Enjoy weekend. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. Because It\'s too hard and boring. so, I thought Why go hiking old people?
3. But now my best favorite hobby is hiking.
4. Because It has fresh air and beautiful scenery and releve stress.
5. So, I like go hiking weekend.
6. I hope you enjoy hiking too.
Thank you for doing your homework! Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. When I was young I don\'t like hiking.
>>When I was young, I didn’t like hiking.
2. Because It\'s too hard and boring. so, I thought Why go hiking old people?
>>I thought it was too hard and boring, so I wondered, “Why do old people go hiking?”
3. But now my best favorite hobby is hiking.
>>But now my favorite hobby is hiking.
4. Because It has fresh air and beautiful scenery and releve stress.
>>Because it gives me fresh air, beautiful scenery, and relieves stress.
5. So, I like go hiking weekend.
>>So, I like to go hiking on weekends.
6. I hope you enjoy hiking too.
>>I hope you enjoy hiking too.
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