homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
My answer is a, b.
>> My answer is a and b.
because I enjoy ancient civilization.
>> First, I chose a because I enjoy learning about ancient civilizations.
I am impressed by through ancestors.
>> I am impressed with how people lived in the past.
also, When you look at ancient remain, very very beautiful.
>> I also loved looking at ancient remains. I think it is very beautiful.
and I like a rest.
>> Second, I chose b because I like to rest.
I want to rest in resort. looking at the ocean..
>> I want to relax in a resort while looking at the ocean.
when I see ocean and hear to ocean sound, I\'m emptying out my complicated [이름]d.
>> When I am looking at the ocean, I feel healed.
sometimes I feel a relax rest.
>> It helps me relax.
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