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2025-09-29 · 첨삭 강사 Cathy

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[이름], you did an excellent job on your sentences! I’m so proud of how you are writing your thoughts in English. You used clear sentences, and it was very easy to understand what you wanted to say.

I especially liked how you wrote “I want to get Lego”-that was perfect! For “I see sun,” you only needed to add the word “the” to make it complete: “I see the sun.” And for “I wish to get a drone,” you did really well, you just needed to fix the spelling of drone.

You are improving so much every time! Keep practicing, and soon your sentences will be even stronger and longer.

~Teacher Cathy


I see sun.

>>I see the sun.

I want to get Lego.

>>CORRECT

I wish to get a dron.

>>I wish to get a drone.



 

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