HOMEWORK
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My favorite cafe is unmanned cafe in near my house.
Because I usually went to that cafe with my Taekwondo friends.
It has good mood and sweet juices
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Su [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework.
Having a favorite spot to visit is beneficial because it evokes pleasant memories and a sense of comfort.
In my case, Rock Valley Cafe is my favorite. Regretfully, the owner sold it to someone else, and I don\'t know if they\'ll keep it running.
I will see you later in class.^^
__T. Mayleen :)
My favorite cafe is unmanned cafe in near my house.
>>> My favorite cafe is an unmanned one near my house.
Because I usually went to that cafe with my Taekwondo friends.
>>> I like it because I usually go to that cafe with my taekwondo friends.
It has good mood and sweet juices
>>> It has good ambience and sell sweet juices.
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