Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What will you do on your long holiday?
I\'m not plan yet.
but, I want to study English hard like my colleagues.
so, I will read easy english a book at home.
and, I will meet my friends after long time.
In fact, My prrents passed away long time ago.
so, I don\'t go anywhere for traditional Korean holidays.
Thank u Divina :) from [이름].
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. but, I want to study English hard like my colleagues.
3. so, I will read easy english a book at home.
4. and, I will meet my friends after long time.
5. In fact, My prrents passed away long time ago.
6. so, I don\'t go anywhere for traditional Korean holidays.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I\'m not plan yet.
>>I don’t have any plans yet.
2. but, I want to study English hard like my colleagues.
>>However, I want to study English hard like my colleagues.
3. so, I will read easy english a book at home.
>>So, I will read an easy English book at home.
4. and, I will meet my friends after long time.
>>And I will meet my friends after a long time.
5. In fact, My prrents passed away long time ago.
>>In fact, my parents passed away a long time ago.
6. so, I don\'t go anywhere for traditional Korean holidays.
>>So I will not go anywhere for traditional Korean holidays.
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