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Can you think of a time when a change you didn’t expect turned out to be a positive experience?
I\'ve had that kind of experience many times. I originally planned to quit my part time job in May, but actually, a director wanted me to teach more classes in another academy. I didn\'t really like the suggestion, but I couldn\'t reject that. But it was better than I thought. Because I had more free time that I thought, and I spent more money that I thought..haha. I could earn much money, thanks to the new academic job.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
You must have felt really grateful.
_T. SHAY
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I\'ve had that kind of experience many times.
>>Correct
OR: I\'ve gone through that kind of situation many times.
I originally planned to quit my part time job in May, but actually, a director wanted me to teach more classes in another academy.
>>Correct
OR: I had originally planned to quit my part-time job in May, but the director requested that I teach additional classes at another academy.
I didn\'t really like the suggestion, but I couldn\'t reject that.
>>Correct
OR: I didn\'t really like the idea, but I couldn\'t refuse.
OR: I wasn\'t happy with the suggestion, but I couldn\'t turn it down.
But it was better than I thought. Because I had more free time that I thought, and I spent more money that I thought..haha.
>>But it turned out to be better than I expected. I actually had more free time that I thought, and I ended up spending more money than expected...haha.
I could earn much money, thanks to the new academic job.
>>Correct
OR: The new academic job allowed me to earn more money.
Thank you for sharing.
You must have felt really grateful.
_T. SHAY
***
I\'ve had that kind of experience many times.
>>Correct
OR: I\'ve gone through that kind of situation many times.
I originally planned to quit my part time job in May, but actually, a director wanted me to teach more classes in another academy.
>>Correct
OR: I had originally planned to quit my part-time job in May, but the director requested that I teach additional classes at another academy.
I didn\'t really like the suggestion, but I couldn\'t reject that.
>>Correct
OR: I didn\'t really like the idea, but I couldn\'t refuse.
OR: I wasn\'t happy with the suggestion, but I couldn\'t turn it down.
But it was better than I thought. Because I had more free time that I thought, and I spent more money that I thought..haha.
>>But it turned out to be better than I expected. I actually had more free time that I thought, and I ended up spending more money than expected...haha.
I could earn much money, thanks to the new academic job.
>>Correct
OR: The new academic job allowed me to earn more money.
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