HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have to drink one beverage, I will drink water.
Because water is important for our body.
Also, if we drink a lots of water
we\'ll be healthy.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Su [이름]!
(^_^)
Drinking water is needed for survival and physical functioning, since it regulates body temperature, transports nutrients, and flushes waste, all while being easily accessible and inexpensive.
Water prevents dehydration and associated symptoms such as headaches, weariness, and constipation, plus it is calorie-free.
I will call you again tomorrow. Have a good night!^^
__T. Mayleen :)
If I have to drink one beverage, I will drink water.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: If I have to drink one beverage all my life, I will drink water.
Because water is important for our body.
>>> It\'s because water is important for our body.
Also, if we drink a lots of water we\'ll be healthy.
>>> Also, if we drink a lot of water, we\'ll be healthy.
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