homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the most unforgettable Korean history for you?
What is it about?
I unforgot the Yi Sun-sin in korea history.
He was very strong. Physical, metally..
He fight the japan for korea.
when he fight, he spread many ships like wings and won.
his history is very famous in korea and childs likes.
I felt the same emotion when I was child.
I want to model his mental strength
강사 첨삭
Hi,
He was very strong. Physical, metally..
He fight the japan for korea.
when he fight, he spread many ships like wings and won.
his history is very famous in korea and childs likes.
I felt the same emotion when I was child.
I want to model his mental strength
Thanks for sharing. I think they also made a movie out of this. He is indeed famous.
-Teacher Ash
I unforgot the Yi Sun-sin in korea history.
>> I can\'t forget about Yi Sun-shin.
He was very strong. Physical, metally..
>> He was very strong physically and mentally.
He fight the japan for korea.
>> He fought for Korea against the Japanese invaders.
when he fight, he spread many ships like wings and won.
>> During one of his battles against Japan, he spread his ships like wings and won.
his history is very famous in korea and childs likes.
>> His story is famous in Korea even among children.
I felt the same emotion when I was child.
>> I was so inspired as a child.
I want to model his mental strength
>> I want to be mentally strong like him.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.