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First, I hope to lose some kilograms and I am gonna hang out or even marry!
I have to get a stable job in the next five years, and save some money. It will be the five years with the most changes in my life.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
It seems those goals are within reach. ^^
_T. SHAY^^
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First, I hope to lose some kilograms and I am gonna hang out or even marry!
>>First, I hope to lose weight, and I also want spend more time hanging out with friends-or maybe even get married!
OR: In the next five years, I hope to lose some weight and improve my health. I also hope to enjoy life more by spending time with friends and maybe even get married.
I have to get a stable job in the next five years, and save some money.
>>I have to get a stable job in the next five years and save some money.
OR: I want to get a stable job and start saving.
It will be the five years with the most changes in my life.
>>Correct
OR: It will be the five years with the greatest changes in my life.
OR: The next five years will bring the most changes in my life.
Thank you for sharing.
It seems those goals are within reach. ^^
_T. SHAY^^
***
First, I hope to lose some kilograms and I am gonna hang out or even marry!
>>First, I hope to lose weight, and I also want spend more time hanging out with friends-or maybe even get married!
OR: In the next five years, I hope to lose some weight and improve my health. I also hope to enjoy life more by spending time with friends and maybe even get married.
I have to get a stable job in the next five years, and save some money.
>>I have to get a stable job in the next five years and save some money.
OR: I want to get a stable job and start saving.
It will be the five years with the most changes in my life.
>>Correct
OR: It will be the five years with the greatest changes in my life.
OR: The next five years will bring the most changes in my life.
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