homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What was your motivation for deciding to acquire tank driving skills over other training programs in the army?
What is the most important thing you have to remember when driving a tank?
Why is it important?
I hoped the special experience in army.
and I thought not just be sentinels and foot soldier.
at first I hoped drive soldier. not tank driver.
but competition was fierce.
tank driver as most important to remember is tank width.
When the troops move, they move to the road by car
Even a little mistake can break the topography side.
강사 첨삭
[이름] [이름],
and I thought not just be sentinels and foot soldier.
tank driver as most important to remember is tank width.
When the troops move, they move to the road by car
Thanks for sharing your experience. I\'m fascinated with how different driving tank is so different with driving a car.
-Teacher Ash
I hoped the special experience in army.
>> I wanted to have a special experience in the army.
and I thought not just be sentinels and foot soldier.
>> I did not want to take the path of beco[이름]g a foot soldier.
at first I hoped drive soldier. not tank driver.
>> At first, I hope to become a driver not a tank driver.
but competition was fierce.
>> However, the competition was fierce, so I decided to train for tank driving.
tank driver as most important to remember is tank width.
>> The most important thing to remember is the tank\'s width.
When the troops move, they move to the road by car
>> CORRECT!
Even a little mistake can break the topography side.
>> Even a little mistake can break the tanks track.
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