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2025-10-03 · 첨삭 강사 Shay

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Has a movie ever inspired you to make a change in your life? If yes, how? Actually, there is no movie has inspired me enough to change in my life. But I thought if I saw \"Inside out\" as I was a childhood, that might change my life. A main character in the movie is always 5 to 10 years younger than me. So I could empathize only with my childhoods , not present.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
Oh, yes, Inside Out is indeed a wonderful movie.
_T. SHAY^^
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Actually, there is no movie has inspired me enough to change in my life.
>>Actually, no movie has inspired me enough to change in my life.
OR: Actually, there is no movie that has inspired me enough to change my life.

OR: I can\'t think of a movie that has had a big enough impact on me to change my life.
But I thought if I saw \"Inside out\" as I was a childhood, that might change my life.
>>But I thought if I had seen \"Inside out\" when I was a child, that might have changed my life.

OR: I feel like if I\'d watched \"Inside Out\" as a kid, it could have had a big impact on me.
A main character in the movie is always 5 to 10 years younger than me.
>>The main character in the movie is always 5 to 10 years younger than me.
So I could empathize only with my childhoods , not present.
>>So I could only empathize with my childhood, not with my present self.

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