Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How should criminals be punished in your country?
I want the criminals more a recieve heavy sentence in the korea.
If criminals have money, they more light recieve sentence.
I would like to korea has death penalty too like china.
Thank u Divina :)
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강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
2. If criminals have money, they more light recieve sentence.
3. I would like to korea has death penalty too like china.
Thank you for doing your homework. Have a happy Chuseok!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I want the criminals more a recieve heavy sentence in the korea.
>>I want criminals in Korea to receive harsher sentences.
2. If criminals have money, they more light recieve sentence.
>>If criminals have money, they often receive lighter sentences.
3. I would like to korea has death penalty too like china.
>>I would like Korea to have the death penalty too, like China.
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