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When I see a Korean movie , both are important to me. But when I see a foreign film, I think storytelling is more important than acting. I don\'t know their acting skills exactly because I can\'t understand their languages, culture, humor. So I just focus on the story of movie more while reading the subtitles.
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Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
You have a good point.
_T. SHAY^^
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When I see a Korean movie , both are important to me.
>>Correct
OR: In Korean movies, both acting and storytelling matter equally.
But when I see a foreign film, I think storytelling is more important than acting.
>>Correct
OR: When I watch a foreign film, I find that storytelling is more important than acting.
I don\'t know their acting skills exactly because I can\'t understand their languages, culture, humor.
>>I don\'t know their acting skills exactly because I can\'t understand their language, culture, and humor.
Thank you for sharing.
You have a good point.
_T. SHAY^^
***
When I see a Korean movie , both are important to me.
>>Correct
OR: In Korean movies, both acting and storytelling matter equally.
But when I see a foreign film, I think storytelling is more important than acting.
>>Correct
OR: When I watch a foreign film, I find that storytelling is more important than acting.
I don\'t know their acting skills exactly because I can\'t understand their languages, culture, humor.
>>I don\'t know their acting skills exactly because I can\'t understand their language, culture, and humor.
OR: I can\'t really judge their acting skills because I don\'t fully understand the language, culture, and humor.
So I just focus on the story of movie more while reading the subtitles.
>>Correct
OR: So instead, I pay more attention to the storyline when I read the subtitles.
So I just focus on the story of movie more while reading the subtitles.
>>Correct
OR: So instead, I pay more attention to the storyline when I read the subtitles.
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