homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
I remember to play game with brothers at Chuseok.
>> I remembered playing a game with my relatives in Chuseok.
I have four relatives brothers.
>> I have four cousins.
Only man.. so I suggested to play the game.
>> They are all boys, so I suggested playing a computer game with them.
we went to the PC room.
>> We went to the PC room.
PC room is computer game room.
>> It is a computer game room.
we enjoyed the STARCRAFT.
>> We had a blast playing Starcraft.
The younger brothers were interesting.
>> I had fun playing with them.
Mainly many people is travel at Chuseok.
>> A lot of people travel during Chuseok.
There is a chance for Chuseok and Seollal during the long holidays.
>> People have a lot of time to travel during long holidays like Chuseok and Seollal.
so they planed travel since a month ago.
>> So, they plan their travel a month before the holiday.
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