Homework
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Do you like cold or hot weather more? Why?
Um.. very difficult questions.
If I have one choice, I like hot weather.
Because, I like work out outside home.
Although, It is weather hot. but It is in the morning early too cool.
So, I usually work out early in the morning in summer.
Good night T. Divina. :)
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2. If I have one choice, I like hot weather.
4. Although, It is weather hot. but It is in the morning early too cool.
5. So, I usually work out early in the morning in summer.
Thank you for doing your homework. Enjoy your weekend!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. Um.. very difficult questions.
>>Um... these are very difficult questions.
2. If I have one choice, I like hot weather.
>>If I had to choose, I would pick hot weather.
3. Because, I like work out outside home.
>>Because I like working out outside.
4. Although, It is weather hot. but It is in the morning early too cool.
>>Although the weather is hot, it’s cool early in the morning.
5. So, I usually work out early in the morning in summer.
>>So, I usually work out early in the morning during summer.
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