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2025-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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Which country has the best soccer players? Why do some countries produce so many great players? Some people complain that soccer games end in a draw too often. Can a drawn game be fun to watch? I think brazil has many great player. Because many children start playing soccer when they are young. Many Brazil players have entered the world soccer league. I don\'t think so. There\'s something to learn from the draw game. I don\'t [이름]d if the draw game is intersting.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름],

Thanks for sharing. I do agree with that. Brazil seems to have many great players.

-Teacher Ash

I think brazil has many great player.

>> I think Brazil has many great players.

Because many children start playing soccer when they are young.

>> Many young children in Brazil start playing at a young age.

Many Brazil players have entered the world soccer league.

>> Many Brazilian players have entered the major league too.

I don\'t think so.

>> CORRECT!

There\'s something to learn from the draw game.

>> We can learn something from a game that ends in draw.

I don\'t [이름]d if the draw game is intersting.

>> I don’t [이름]d watching a game that ends in a draw if it is interesting.

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