Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
1. It is good that the sea and ski resort are close there.
but the best thing is that my mother and friends are in my birthplace.
2. Our accent is affected by our birthplace
because we learn to speak and hearing sounds around us.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ivan!
Good job! I like how you shared personal details about your birthplace and explained your thoughts clearly. Your sentences are easy to understand, and you’re doing well connecting ideas logically. Keep practicing to make your writing even smoother!
~Teacher Polly
1. It is good that the sea and ski resort are close there.
but the best thing is that my mother and friends are in my birthplace.
>>It’s great that the sea and ski resorts are close by, but the best thing is that my mother and friends are in my birthplace.
2. Our accent is affected by our birthplace
because we learn to speak and hearing sounds around us.
>>Our accent is influenced by our birthplace because we learn to speak by hearing the sounds around us.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.