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2025-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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When I hear the word \'October\', I feel regretful. Because this year almost finish. But I like to made snowman. so I also excited

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Hello there, Su [이름]!

October is the tenth month of the year, known for Halloween and the autumn season with changing leaves and cooler weather.
It is also a time for harvest celebrations in many cultures.

Thank you for finding time to answer your homework. I will talk to you again tomorrow. Have a goodnight!^^

_Teacher Mayleen :)


When I hear the word \'October\', I feel regretful.
>>> CORRECT
>>> OR: Whenever I hear the word \'October,\' I feel regretful.

Because this year almost finish.
>>> It\'s because the year is almost over.

But I like to made snowman. so I also excited
>>> However, I like to make a snowman in winter, so I am also excited.

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