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What other places can people visit in Jeju Island?
I think Jeju Island has many beautiful places.
One of the best famous places is Hallasan.
Especially, It is most of beautiful winter with snow.
and There are various delicious restaurant too.
Although, It is expensive many come people in Jeju lsland.
Thank you T.Divina :) from [이름].
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Hi, [이름]!
2. One of the best famous places is Hallasan.
3. Especially, It is most of beautiful winter with snow.
4. and There are various delicious restaurant too.
5. Although, It is expensive many come people in Jeju lsland.
Thank you for doing your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some corrections:
1. I think Jeju Island has many beautiful places.
>>CORRECT!
2. One of the best famous places is Hallasan.
>>One of the most famous places is Hallasan.
3. Especially, It is most of beautiful winter with snow.
>>It is especially beautiful in winter when it’s covered with snow.
4. and There are various delicious restaurant too.
>>There are also many delicious restaurants.
5. Although, It is expensive many come people in Jeju lsland.
>>Although it’s expensive, many people still come to Jeju Island.
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