homework &
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1) He is going to phone his friend. 2) We are going to play a new computer game.
3) My sister is going to watch TV. 4) You are going to have a picnic next Tuesday.
5) Jane is going to go to the office.
My friend Helena sent a funny massage.That was my price.
There is the setting price site on the internet.
I put my name in blank space then it analazes me and set price on me.
The massage is that my price is 900,000,000 won.
And my features are that I have plenty of sense,I'm active and a walking newspapers. I am set on the highest price. Helena who sent it to me is 3,000 won.
It said that she is good at massage, she gives anybody love well.
But be warned, she is apt to get angry.
Another friend Sun-Mi didn't have her price. Her price is on negotiating.
Sun-mi's features are that she is useful with cleaning and she is faithful.
We think that it is like that it is like a slave trade.
This is a jokking. But we seemed to believe that.
Today was funny with thease massage
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name],
Good day to you..:)
Thank you for making a perfect homework once again and thank you as well in sharing some about your day.
I think you really had a great day with those messages..
By the way we can talk about that on our class..
Take care always Miss. [Name]..
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
1) He is going to phone his friend.
>>correct
2) We are going to play a new computer game. >>correct
3) My sister is going to watch TV.
>>correct
4) You are going to have a picnic next Tuesday.
>>correct5) Jane is going to go to the office. >>correctMy friend Helena sent a funny massage.That was my price.
>>My friend Helena sent me a funny message regarding my price.
There is the setting price site on the internet.
>>There is this Setting Price site on the internet.I put my name in blank space then it analazes me and set price on me.
>>I just have to put my name on the blank then it will analyze me and set price on me.The massage is that my price is 900,000,000 won.
>>My price whisch is 900,000,000 won was indicated on the message.And my features are that I have plenty of sense,I\'m active and a walking newspapers.
>>And my features include, humorous,active and I\'m even a walking newspaper according to them.
I am set on the highest price.
>>correct
Helena who sent it to me is 3,000 won.
>>Helena who sent message to me has a price os 3,000 won.It said that she is good at massage, she gives anybody love well.
>>According to them she is good in conversation and loves anybody so much.But be warned, she is apt to get angry.
>>But be warned, she is apt to getting angry.Another friend Sun-Mi didn\'t have her price.
>>correct
Her price is on negotiating.
>>Her price is under negotiation.
Sun-mi\'s features are that she is useful with cleaning and she is faithful.
>>Her features mentioned are useful in cleaning and being faithful.We think that it is like that it is like a slave trade.
>>We regard this like a slave trade.This is a jokking. But we seemed to believe that.
>>This is just for fun but we seem to believe that.Today was funny with thease massage
>>This day was good because of these funny messages.
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