Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
How do you stay safe during bad weather?
I always check the weather from news.
Sometimes if it bad weather, I usually don\'t go out side from home.
When I have to go work, I prefer to use pubulic traffic.
Because, I think the pubulic traffic more safety then my car.
Thank you T.Divina. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
2. Sometimes if it bad weather, I usually don\'t go out side from home.
3. When I have to go work, I prefer to use pubulic traffic.
4. Because, I think the pubulic traffic more safety then my car.
Thank you for doing your homework.
~T. Divina^^
Here are some notes:
1. I always check the weather from news.
>>I always check the weather on the news.
2. Sometimes if it bad weather, I usually don\'t go out side from home.
>>If the weather is bad, I usually don’t go outside.
3. When I have to go work, I prefer to use pubulic traffic.
>>When I have to go to work, I prefer to use public transportation.
4. Because, I think the pubulic traffic more safety then my car.
>>I think public transportation is safer than my car.
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