homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Question: Do you agree that a person’s actions show their true thoughts and feelings better than their words? Discuss in 3 to 5 sentences.
Answer: Yes, I agree. Because It can proves words are a little weak than actions. So people don\'t look down on who do actions rather than the words.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Belle. I appreciate your effort in doing the homework today. Good job on making longer sentences; however, continue to follow the correct grammar sequence of the sentences. Keep it up! Have a good night and see you in the next class. ~Teacher Jane ^__^
Yes, I agree.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: Yes, I agree that a person\'s actions show their true thoughts and feelings.
Because It can proves words are a little weak than actions.
>> It proves that words are weaker than actions.
So people don\'t look down on who do actions rather than the words.
>> So people don\'t look down on who does the actions, but the one who speaks the words.
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