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학생이 쓴 원문
I like to meet new people, because that is a great experience. and almost people was kind I met ever. when I met them I get a energy. I\'m looking forward to meet new people.
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Jean~~
Do you like meeting new people?
I like to meet new people, because that is a great experience.
>>> I like meeting new people because it\'s a great experience.
>>> OR: Meeting new people is always a great experience.
and almost people was kind I met ever.
>>> Most of the people I\'ve met have been kind.
when I met them I get a energy.
>>> When I meet them, I feel energized.
>>> OR: I get positive energy from meeting new people.
I\'m looking forward to meet new people.
>>> I\'m looking forward to meeting more new people.
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