Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
What are some everyday activities that contribute to pollution?
First, delivery service makes a lot of trash because of their packages. When we order food delivery, they use a lot of single-use plastic boxes and bags that contribute to pollution. To reduce these trash, we need to pick it up in our reusable containers.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Megan^^
Thank you for sharing.
You\'re right.
It is indeed a big factor especially these days.
_T. SHAY^^
***
First, delivery service makes a lot of trash because of their packages.
>>First, delivery services make a lot of trash because of their packaging.
OR: First, online deliveries create a lot of garbage because of their packaging materials.
When we order food delivery, they use a lot of single-use plastic boxes and bags that contribute to pollution.
>>Correct
OR: Ordering food delivery generates a lot of plastic waste from boxes and bags, contributing to pollution.
To reduce these trash, we need to pick it up in our reusable containers.
>>To reduce this trash, we should use our own reusable containers.
Thank you for sharing.
You\'re right.
It is indeed a big factor especially these days.
_T. SHAY^^
***
First, delivery service makes a lot of trash because of their packages.
>>First, delivery services make a lot of trash because of their packaging.
OR: First, online deliveries create a lot of garbage because of their packaging materials.
When we order food delivery, they use a lot of single-use plastic boxes and bags that contribute to pollution.
>>Correct
OR: Ordering food delivery generates a lot of plastic waste from boxes and bags, contributing to pollution.
To reduce these trash, we need to pick it up in our reusable containers.
>>To reduce this trash, we should use our own reusable containers.
OR: To cut down on waste, we can bring our reusable containers.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.