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[이름] [이름],
Thanks for sharing. I agree, we get rid of toxins from our bodies when we exercise.
-Teacher Ash
I think the important is woking out.
>> I think working out is more important than eating healthy.
because excercise discharge waste through wet. and I feel helthy.
>> It is because when we exercise, we sweat, which removes toxins from our bodies.
I think it is okay if I exercise, I eat delicious food.
>> I think it is okay if I exercise and eat delicious food at the same time.
no, exercise is effort.
>> No, exercise is putting effort.
I don\'t felt addictive.
>> I don’t feel addicted to it.
I exercise like work.
>> I think of exercise as work.
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