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2025-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Ash

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To be healthy, which is more important? Eating well or working out? Give your reasons. Some people work out very often. Is exercise addictive? I think the important is woking out. because excercise discharge waste through wet. and I feel helthy. I think it is okay if I exercise, I eat delicious food. no, exercise is effort. I don\'t felt addictive. I exercise like work.

강사 첨삭

[이름] [이름], 


Thanks for sharing. I agree, we get rid of toxins from our bodies when we exercise. 


-Teacher Ash


I think the important is woking out.

>> I think working out is more important than eating healthy. 


because excercise discharge waste through wet. and I feel helthy.

>> It is because when we exercise, we sweat, which removes toxins from our bodies. 


I think it is okay if I exercise, I eat delicious food.

>> I think it is okay if I exercise and eat delicious food at the same time. 


no, exercise is effort.

>> No, exercise is putting effort.


I don\'t felt addictive.

>> I don’t feel addicted to it. 


I exercise like work.

>> I think of exercise as work.


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